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I'm still working on this, so I'd appreciate any advice or critiques you would be kind enough to give. Be mean; pick it apart; flame it constructively. If you do, I'll love you forever.
The original, incredibly horrible doodle this is based on is in my scraps at: [link] I'm claiming the dinky doodle as the reason the proportions suck... you know, instead of laziness. It's not pretty; so don't waste your time if you've got better things to do. It's just an example of my stupidity and lack of foresight. Painted in Photoshop with a tablet. And remember, if you can't say anything mean, then don't say anything at all. |
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your face could last forever,
if only i could inhale for sure .
jessica
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your face could last forever,
if only i could inhale for sure .
jessica
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i hate myself for loving you cant break free from the things that you do. i want to walk but i run back to you. thats why i hate myself for loving you.
--Joan Jett (i hate myself)
And not with the technique, but with the depth.
All shadows have more or less the same size, and this makes its feel like a 2 layer of paper collage.
I'd change the shadows of the column and the shadows of the head over the hair,
Hope it helps
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Some Random!
The second thing is the ear... I don't know if this is what you were going for or not but it looks like it's dropped a good couple of inches down her face and landed on her jaw line!
Other than that, I love it and probably wouldn't have cared about the ear thing if you hadn't asked! Keep up the good work!
...Khufu!
The ear: Ack! You're right. Her head/jawbone has been bugging me for a while now; it's always looked too... short? (for lack of a better description) I couldn't figure out why until you mentioned the ear. I think I can fix it a bit; everything is on a separate layer. Or maybe I'll just blame it on the bad sketch/laziness. Either way, thanks!
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I am determined to live forever, or die in the process.
And I agree on the ear part. I don't remember drows have ears right on the jaw, at least not according to R.A.Salvatore descriptions.
Ok, I can't get meaner than that. :sigh: since I can't even paint that good.
Oh one more thing, it's the hair.. I wonder how it looks like without the curtain blocking it.
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"Explain this to me: Why is it when they say a man has the mind of a child, they lock him up while children are allowed free in the streets?" ~Garfield
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